Manana por la noche voy a ir por una fecha con mi companera The Queen. Ella es muy perfecto y me encanta ser con ella. Vamos a ir al restaurante en ella casa Buckingham Palace. Pero anteayer fuimos a uno restaurante Espanol y era horrible. En primer lugar el camarero estaba muy grosa y muy feo y la carne estaba fria y sucia, y despues los sientos pero carocales no son postre. Personellemente pienso que mi companera The Queen odio el alimento.
Going to go on date with the Queen tomorrow.
ResponderEliminarShe is very perfuct and you love being with her.
We are going to a restaurant in her house Buckingham Palace. But yesterday you went to a restaurant in Spain and it was horrible. Firstly the waiter was very (grosa-don't know what that means) and very (feo-don't know what that means either). The meat was cold and dirty, and after... (don't know what the phrase after that means). Personally I think that The queen hates food.
8/10- Well structured and interesting. To improve you might want to stick to just the vocab learnt in lessons for now.
Make it fancier later.